Sailing through the winds, My heart stops for a while I seem to soar above in heaven While the water's pushed behind The rumbling of the waves below The echo of birds in sky Two of us in a boat Are leaving the world the behind
The water is too cruel Blue waves as merciless knives Cutting through the plants and fish Who seem to pay their price The underworld is busy In the affairs harsh and wild Two of us in a boat Are leaving the world behind
What would it feel like to leave all that hurts the soul (you) and move forward to where it belongs? Going with the one to whom we belong? The one who is the path and the destination, one who will sail us through this Bhavsagar (ocean of miseries)
This journey is all yours. You and God, he sails you sing, go on and never weep again. Take along all those things that link you to him, take along your love and gift it to him and finally submit yourself to him
harvest_of_mind@shrihari_nandini I can relate and feel your longing for the desired . First para is difficult to comprehend as first 3 lines convey that you are flying in air. Last 2 lines of para only makes the situation clear. A suggestion- Do you find it agreeable to begin with...
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