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sangini_kesarwani
158w
Read More20.06.19
#ceesshorties
Please accept my apologies for not posting it on time as I was very busy yesterday! ����
After a long time I have accepted any challenge. Hope it seems something sensible to you!����26 6 7
- sangini_kesarwani @freespirit13 thank you.
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- drinderjeet very beautiful
Saudade
When I felt there is no shine without dark
When I keep all odd memories away
When I feel even black is beautiful
When I accept all my thorns and
When I walk in the bare foot on lonesome road
Ignoring all others thought
In the past, now and hope so in the future
I endure myself saudade on my assertiveness being forlorn.
©amree_the_little_cactus36 4 4
- luvnotes_challenge_host Beautifully penned for the challenge, and I appreciate your participation, but please be mindful of the closing time. ✍
- amree_the_little_cactus Thankyou for ypur appreciation and so sorry for my late entry, because I just found this challenge at the last moment. @carolyns_challenge_account
- amree_the_little_cactus Tysm @timeblossom
- luvnotes_challenge_host You're very welcome.
sumeet19
158w
Read More#ceesshorties
@carolyns_challenge_account
Thanks for the lovely challenge
Words used— sojourn,elegiac
Pic credit: to the rightful owner
#writersnetwork #mirakee #writerstolliA neon sky sojourns in my eyes
Like old sapphire gin
An elegiac lament
Of a moonstruck mind
With chords of elusive beauty
Three miles down near the bay of sighs
Zephyrs whisper the truth
Some things never change
©sumeet1931 6 3
- dusky_dawn Beautiful
- sumeet19 Thanks 🙏🏻@carolyns_challenge_account
- sumeet19 @dusky_dawn
- luvnotes_challenge_host Very welcome.
- sumeet19 @timeblossom thanks so much
writersthought
158w
She is a rhapsodhy for the lovers.
Her skin shines like a newly met inamorata.
Her charisma cures the malady yet
her beauty creates a saudade for the lovelorn.
She is a paradigm of everlasting
love but her life is sojourn.
Her fragrance creates an amorous mood and
elegy as well in accordance with the ceremony.
She makes us think that she's duplicitous.
She is the compendium of multitudinous.
She is the perennial flower who comes in
over three hundred species from
the family called Rosaceae and her
delightful name is "Rose".
©anisesh40 15 10
- writersthought @sweetnovember thanks dear ❤
- __eisha_000 Soo beautifullll
- writersthought @eisha_000 thanks a lot dear ❤
- luvnotes_challenge_host More than welcome.
nishaat_12
158w
In dream
I gazed, gazed, gazed him, forgetting universe around, in his eyes I was searching the love I want, his charismatic personality is bending my heart down
The words he was uttering has rhapsodic tune within
My eyes was in search to capture him
My heart was in search to beat for him
My ears was in search to hear him
I was waiting to hold him in my arms
Imagination and Everything around was so
Beautiful
My lovelorn destiny reached before my love
The dream of my fantasy broken once again
With an alarm clock
©nishaat_1244 6 10
- dusky_dawn
- luvnotes_challenge_host A beautiful piece and wonderful use of the word prompts!! Thank you for participating. ✍
- ritika_writes_ Lovely 🦋🌷
- lovenotes_from_carolyn Hope all is well, dear writer! Haven't seen you lately...
- nishaat_12 @lovenotes_from_carolyn Hi mam, I am fine thank you, was a bit occupied with worldly issue's
Autumn leaves get
rustled n’ stirred deeply
with my emotional sojourn
Sighs wade their way
thru’ the sea of leaves
like a lovelorn
©preetkanwal37 6 7
- dusky_dawn Beautiful
- luvnotes_challenge_host That was quite lovely! Thank you for participating. ✍
- preetkanwal Thanku so much for appreciating madam@carolyn_challenge
- preetkanwal Thanks dear@sweetnovember@dusky_dawn
No charisma here
I possess none
I'm no charmer
I'm no lady of words
For my mouth and my brain
Does not get along
©jmcboss10128 5 5
- joan53 You crack me up!! Love that one!!
- dusky_dawn Well penned
- luvnotes_challenge_host And yet you've penned an awesome piece for the challenge with a terrific portrayal of the chosen word prompts! Thank you for participating. ✍
- poeticlycan101 @carolyns_challenge_account thank you!
- luvnotes_challenge_host You're very welcome.
Nowdays teenagers are the one
Who are having malady of being lovelorn
They don't understand that there Felicity
Should depend on themselves not on others
Feel the sonorous charisma
Blooming in your heart
And let it flow in the verses of love
To fill the world with delight and charm.
©shashwatmishra_kanahiya138 35 36
- shashwatmishra_kanahiya Thanks @aashitkumarsinha
- shashwatmishra_kanahiya Thanks @zeiun_ziolet
- ritika_writes_ Amazing
- shaliya Wonderfully penned
- loverenay Beautiful! ❤
Waiting for him
Everyone gathered in Agora
With no Agenda
All speaking Abracadabra
Then came the Alpha;
filling the air with his charisma
We couldn't resist his charm
We had to follow him
©akinwole33 2 5
- luvnotes_challenge_host Absolutely terrific piece for the challenge! Thank you for participating. 😊👌👌✍
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lidoklause
#carolyns_challenge_account
Thank you for the kind comment
chitra_p
158w
Read MoreMelody In My Heart
This is my attempt to @carolyns_challenge_account 's recent challenge.
#mirakee #pod #writersnetwork #writerstolli #ceesrepost #ceesshortiesMelody in My Heart
You created a melody in my heart
When my lovelorn heart was searching one
But you said you were a petty traveler
Resounding love notes on your way.
But your elegiac rhapsody reverberates my entity
Purging me from my vex.
O voyager with heartfelt tune, sojourn in my heart for a while
Cure me from the malady of yearning
I shall adorn myself as your inamorata
You could be my soulful manstress
Let us delve into the abode of bliss
And then you could resume your pending voyage
With a new rhapsody to sing for
Well, I shall move on with no regrets
With no feelings of saudade, only a lingering cheerful melody.
©chitra_p28 3 6
- luvnotes_challenge_host It's a very beautifully penned piece! Thank you for participating.
- chitra_p @carolyns_challenge_account thank you so much
- luvnotes_challenge_host More than welcome.
3rdwizard
158w
MELODY
Your sonorous rhythm
May exceed to thee universe
Enlighten thy optimal paradigm
Heal thy malady of realm
Beyond thy echo of your melody.17 5 2
- luvnotes_challenge_host Beautiful flow to this wonderful piece! Great word prompt choices too! Thank you for participating. ✍
-
3rdwizard
WC ma'am @carolyns_challenge_account
thank you for the appreciation & inspiration - 3rdwizard looking forward learning from you Ma'am such an eloquent writer
- luvnotes_challenge_host You're very welcome, and thank you for the kind words!!
- 3rdwizard
Once my life was a Rhapsody
Happy to be your penumbra
Though I didn't know was only mere darkness
Disguised by what my heart and eyes would allow
A vision of love, happiness, and family
I suffered a malady of love struck nievete
The multitudinous stars above knew better
Soon I could only write elegiac poetry
To a broken heart that refused to mend
Not to shine forth, but die into a black hole
©joan5327 3 5
- luvnotes_challenge_host Outstanding job on this!! Really love how beautifully you wove the chosen word prompts throughout your piece! Thank you for participating. ✍
- joan53 Thank you
- dusky_dawn
sahnah
158w
Read More#ceesshorties #mirakee #writersnetwork #challenge #wordprompt #shortpiece #laughing_soul @writersnetwork @carolyns_challenge_account @kosachaya @pocketsmile @raven63 @asmakhan @iammusaafiir @twinkling_girl @geet50
Presenting my challenge piece in @carolyns_challenge_account. Hope you will like it Ma'am...������Let the sonorous voice of his inamorata echoed in this world to allow these multitudinous angels carried away this lovelorn soul from this sojourn to his eternal destination.
©sahnah42 9 12
- sumana_chakraborty Awesome
- divyam_ Beautifully carved ❤
- sahnah @iammusaafiir Thank u Sir....
- sahnah @raven63 @pocketsmile @sumana_chakraborty @divyam_ Thank u my beautiful ladies...
AN_OPEN_BOOK
Not to be an open book they say
Not to utter stories to everyone
But I desire to tell stories to some
To some who gonna SOJOURN at any of my LOVELORN pages
If I am a book, I need my pages to be read
Before any MALADY catches me
Before I decay
©plashrawal18 4 2
- the_plash_writes @kosachaya @ruchika_sharma @iammusaafiir @soulwritter @mirakee @readwriteunite @writersnetwork
- luvnotes_challenge_host Bravo!! Fantastic job on this! Thank you for participating, and please say hello to your fur covered friend in the dp! I'm a longtime cat fancier myself. ✍
-
the_plash_writes
@carolyns_challenge_account thanks mam
And my kitty is also saying thanks - luvnotes_challenge_host You're both very welcome.
anamica_nanda
158w
Elegy
Lovelorn, he picked up the compendium to compose a rhapsody for his lover. But words failed, as her charisma haunted him as an elegy.
©anamica_nanda39 3 4
- luvnotes_challenge_host Fantastic piece!! Thank you for participating. ✍
- anamica_nanda Thank you for such an innovative challenge and the encouraging words. @carolyns_challenge_account
- luvnotes_challenge_host You're very welcome.
sharmilajuliet
158w
Read MoreImage credit : To it's rightful owner
#fallingleaves_wt #ceesshorties #desolate #falling #desolation #nimble #charisma #saudade #sojourn #lovelorn #leaves #heart #stillness #forget #wilting #amdist #beginning #freedom #hugging #expecting #welcoming #autumn #ease #lands #new #way #bluepup #tod_wt #pod #writerstolli #writersnetwork #mirakee #thewriterstribe #poem2heart #p2h @writerstolli @writersnetwork @mirakee @poem2heartWhile the wind nimble
Falling leaves lands in ease
As its hugging the freedom or
Its expecting the new beginning
Amdist desolation of wilting leaves
The way it's welcoming the autumn
Is the charisma that will make every
lovelorn heart too forget its saudade
And put them into the sojourn stillness.
©sharmilajuliet111 31 31
- sharmilajuliet @saquib012 thank you so much
- sumana_chakraborty Lovely ...
- sharmilajuliet @sumana_chakraborty thank you so much ❤️
- amritapaulchowdhury Truly impressive
- sharmilajuliet @amritapaulchowdhury thank you so much ❤️
His charisma had made her fall for him.
So deep that, her heart,
instead of beating in a divine rhapsody,
played an elegiac piece.
From an lovelorn, she now turned into a
beautiful sonorous that touches
several million hearts through her
peal of poetry!
©anu_warrior0319 7 3
- _____________________________________ spend it all on one, if its a worthy one, if not , love yourself and overflow to others to bless others.... both equally good choices :)
- anu_warrior03 @equilibrium
- luvnotes_challenge_host Wonderful job on this! So beautifully written! Thank you for participating. ✍
- anu_warrior03 Thank you @carolyns_challenge_account
- luvnotes_challenge_host Very welcome.
Emphatize
An eerie world it is
comprising lovelorn beings
Shadow of emptiness
steals charisma of eyes
Do not talk of promises
Nor of eternal togetherness
Earn just a tinge of empathy
Sharpening edge of sympathy
Let veiled eyes be pristine
So the dim corners shine.
©Nazifa18 7 3
- luvnotes_challenge_host You're very welcome! And I was very glad to see you! I always enjoy your beautifully penned contributions to the challenges.
- nazifa @carolyns_challenge_account These words weigh a lot ma'am. Every appreciation and expression of your love is indeed a reflection of your beautiful soul.☺ I'd go on and on yet can't exactly describe how much I adore you!May Allah bless you and your family with every kind of eternal goodness!
- luvnotes_challenge_host Oh my! I'm more than honored by that, thank you!! My eyes will soon be flooding, and I'll have to run for the tissue! Wishing every blessing for you too.
- nazifa You deserve these words and even more. And I won't feel guilty for drenching your eyes this time! ☺ @carolyns_challenge_account
- luvnotes_challenge_host ❤❤❤
animesh2307
158w
Read More¤It is always important to know when something has reached its end. Closing circles, shutting doors, finishing chapters, it doesn't matter what we call it; what matters is to leave in the past those moments in life that are over.¤
¤Paulo Coelho¤
#fallingleaves_wt #writerstolli #mirakee @writerstolli
#ceesshorties #compendium #elegiac #rhapsodyEpilogue
Wish I could again walk on the paths known to me,
Revisit the doors which once were so neighbourly,
I yearn for a glimpse of familiar faces who always welcome with rhapsody.
Wish I could for one last time relive those countless memories,
Like strolling through the promenade of the familiar streets,
lined with trees with plenteous fallen leaves.
maybe reminiscing those moments will clear the fog,
Will end my story and write a compendium epilogue,
before my friend darkness creeps in and an elegiac silence slowly follows like a dog.
©animesh230718 2 4
- writerstolli Beautiful write
- luvnotes_challenge_host Magnificent use of the chosen word prompts!! Thank you for participating. ✍
sumana_chakraborty
158w
Read More#ceesshorties#desolate#pod#writersnetwork#readwriteunite@mirakee@carolyns_challenge_account
WORDS USED : Sonorous , saudade , rhapsodyLeave me alone in my mayhem storm
I'd love to sing my melancholic song
I'd love to tune those dissonant chords
Which have stopped rhapsodizing since aeons
Whose sonorous sound and synchronous rhythm
Would vibrate once again desolate heart's ventricles
Let me experience the ache of saudade's turmoil
It would impart me tolerance galore
I won't break down at all , I swear
Hope and optimism , I'd adore.
©sumana_chakraborty235 73 78
- ___7___ ❤❤
- sumana_chakraborty @keeraa thanks dear ❤️
- sumana_chakraborty @kosachaya thanks dear
- naushadtm Amazing ❤️
