purpleenigma199 likes? Oh my, I'm near years. You all have no idea how much this means to me after weeks spent discussing this very topic with friends and I've lost one of my best friends along the way. Just to know that even a few of you are able to see my perspective and not bring about argument is so meaningful. I am forever grateful for this amazing community
___7___The first two stanzas , agh , these are exactly the kind of thoughts that toss inside my brain , yours ,here , as sheer wordplay and legit poetry , mine as doubts to make 'em look very personal .
___7___The next two stanzas are pure palak observations , are amongst many absurdities we sort ourselves with , brilliant in a static view And as the reader moves deep , it pleasantly agitates him
___7___And the next one is the core stanza for me fighting the need and misdeed of the circle theory.
___7___And what a conclusion , landing slow from irrationality to rational reality , shaping a loop in between to join the different threads/ differences.
A lil' shout out against racism here or not. This has my head .
artsyyIt will take me more than one read to understand. But it would be worth it . Till then, I would say you are an amazing writer, as ever.