prose_nexusThis is quite something, my friend. If I might offer a candid critique: If your piece is lengthier than a simple scroll, it'll be a bit tedious to work through as a reader. #foodforthought
gemsofficiel@prose_nexus Thank you. I'm new to this app so I'm still trying to figure it out. I appreciate your critique. Is it too long to read? And what do you feel is the appropriate length for a poem here?
prose_nexus'The silent killer' piece is beautiful. The length of the work depends on you, but what you have to consider is whether it's a work that simply conveys a singular subject matter or an essay that may dive into things for a long time. Keep the focus on what you wish to show us. Hit me up on IG:@damon.lite if you feel the need.