Woman woman woman
Is she not human ?
Why she feels depressed?
Why she feels stressed?
Why she is not enjoying life?
What problems she is facing?
Why and till when she face alone?
When she cares for everyone **
Isn't its everyone's responsibility;
To look after her,
To give her identity &
To give her what she deserves...
She must be treated as holy water
And not as hellfire
When she does each task happily
Why can't she be able to live fully and truly...
©pooja17
#p2h_womens_day2
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ak_anjali_daydreamzz 127w
#mirakee #pod #writersnetwork #writerstolli @mirakee @writersnetwork @writerstolli#julietscorner #yaminiread
#ceesreposts #love #life #poetry #nature #inspiration
#p2h_womens_day2 Series : #ak_wday
Topic - She a Hellfire dipped in Holy water
Rhyme - aabb 5words x 16 lines
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She is a burning hellfire
Sparking in you sweet desire
In your dreams you wish
To have her love, selfish
She sparked the love light
In darkness she's your candlelight
You are dying of resistance
Yearning to cross the distance
Blessing holy water, you ponder
Fire purging sins, you wonder
Does it burn, her touch
Does it hurt, so much
Her existence is your motivation
Her presence is your salvation
Burning in the hellfire together
A holy union promising forever
©ak_anjali_daydreamzzShe is a burning hellfire
Sparking in you sweet desire
In your dreams you wish
To have her love, selfish
©ak_anjali_daydreamzz197 36 61- lily_love Splendid
- mann_se_ amazing
- shaiz_fs You are the best forever ♥️
- thoughtsprocess Wow... Amazing
- manasaa Just perfect. I absolutely love the rhyme❤❤
She a hellfire dipped
in holy water ;
over the decades
she is fellucinated
under his arms
while he's loving her
she tries to leave him.
©ramya0412 3 2authenticcreations 127w
Sacred ,is her visage like
She is endowed with care
She is like the sunshine
Which you can just stare.
But that is the half
You always see in her
Hidden is the ember inside
Which glows even in water.
Love and care are only
A glimpse of its light.
She is so enlightened and
Acknowledged in her own right.
The fire inside rests together,
With the holy waters, harmoniously.
But remember it's still lighted,
Which she can display sumptuously
©authenticcreations
*Picture credits-To the rightful owner
#p2h_womens_day2 #pod #poem2heart #p2h @ckfilvan @mahtobpensdown @notyourtype @_kaz_08_ @atticoftheheart @odysseus @sproutedseeds @sanguinity @solace @platipoem
#yaminiread #writerstolli #ceesreposts #mirakee #writersnetwork #julietscorner #poem2heart(Read the Caption)
©authenticcreations55 16 14- sharmilajuliet Fantastic
- authenticcreations @sharmilajuliet thank you ma'am
- sharmilajuliet @authenticcreations you're most welcome ❤️
- ak_anjali_daydreamzz Wonderful ❣️❣️❣️
- authenticcreations @ak_anjali_daydreamzz thank you so much ❤️❤️
hirani_amiksha 127w
Sun is also cold
In front of her
Who is burning bold
She has the power
To turn a building
Into a tower
World only subsists
Because of
Her painful risks
She is the purest form
Of the being
On this platform
#p2h_womens_day2Read the caption
©hirani_amiksha20 6 6- hirani_amiksha @authenticcreations Thank you
- authenticcreations @hirani_amiksha read my poem too
- hirani_amiksha @authenticcreations I read it...I liked it too. It was amazing
- poem2heart Nice
- hirani_amiksha @poem2heart Thank you
Eve's intuitiveness made her woman
Set the beginning of hell fire
She is a kind knife
Duality of creator and destroyer
Fragile yet stronger inwardly
Burning herself to create history
Beautiful yet deceiving
Virtues are her holiness
She dips herself in it
Amalgamation of goddess, demoness
Questioning her self makes monsteress
Fighting for righteousness
Dip in holy water, victory
Ripples created in history
Symbolic of Good and evil
A glass disguised as women.
©sulu808 1 1eurusgrey 127w
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She is grace,
Her voice is venom laced.
Those eyes shine brighter than the stars,
The fire in her can cause wars.
As gentle as the autumn breeze,
Violent storms she could seize.
Epitome of a warrior,
Those scars make her stronger.
Yes she's a writer,
Hellfire dipped in holy water.
©_griffindork35 9 7- poem2heart Superb
- eurusgrey @poem2heart thank you!!
- sharmilajuliet Wonderful
- eurusgrey @sharmilajuliet thanks
- sharmilajuliet @_griffindork you're most welcome ❤️
Her breath filled with hope
A sweet voice ruling hearts
Walk barefoot in marshy land
Bleeding foot blooms roses
Furious storm and calm flow
Cleansing wave quenching thirst
Fights from packs shields family
Burns the demons thy goddess
A wrath sweeping away sorrows
Ethereal marks of courage
A Warrior and mysterious knight
Tears are silent prayers
Raises almighty love and will
Celestial bodies salute her
She is a hellfire
Dipped in holy water
©sksfantasy_girl23 11 5- poem2heart Amazing
- sksfantasy_girl Thank You @poem2heart
- sharmilajuliet Amazing
- sksfantasy_girl Thank You ❤❤ @sharmilajuliet
- sharmilajuliet @sksfantasy_girl you're most welcome ❤️
poem2heart 127w
Entry for this part is Closed
Women's Day Challenge - Part Il
Topic of second part challenge is " She a Hellfire dipped in Holy Water / அவள் புனிதநீரில் மூழ்கவைத்த நரகநெருப்பு " (Given line is topic. It's not necessary phrase or title. So, understand the topic and write your post in your way)
Use #p2h_womens_day2 for this challenge part. (Only for this challenge part)
Your post must have to be within 16 lines only.
Must be in poetic form. Your lines must be within 5 words (Not more than 5).
No sexual content allowed.
Only original work. No plagiarism.
You can use picture as your wish. But, if your content not visible because of your image you must have to put it in Caption section.(unclear posts will automatically get disqualified.)
You can't add tittle for your post .
Language : Tamil & English only (If other language writers wish to participate you must give translation in either Tamil or English).
Image credit to it's rightful owner.
You must participate all part of this challenge as participants. If you miss any part you already withdrawing yourself from this challenge.
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Reference :
"women's Day" Challenge will be similar to "Valentine's Day Series" Challenge. But litte twist in it. Let's check.
The Challenge will be held on 4 parts.
Tamil & English only
For first part I will give one topic you have to write about that topic for first day.
Like first day I will give second, third & fourth day their respective topics you have to write about that.
First, Second, third days your post have to be within 16 lines only.
Must be in poetic form. Only 5 words allowed for a line.
Fourth & final day of challenge you have to write about given topic.
And you have to select the lines(only within 20 lines) from your all posts and post it as final post with adding title.(last post must be from your 1,2,3 & 4 part only)
You can't add tittle for your post before last day.
You can't merge your everyday content before last day.
You have to post your post seperately for every part untill last day.
Entry for the challenge is open till 12:00 PM of Saturday (7th March 2k20).
"Women's Day Challenge will be end on 10:00PM at 8th March 2k20
People who participated from the 1st part only can be considered part of this challenge.
Seperate hastag for everyday will be given to you.
♦️To participate in this challenge you have to follow all given rules. Interested people only participate.
Winner will be awarded with E-CERTIFICATE.
Guys spread this Challenge by reposting and tagging to many writers to participate.
For Tamil Posts : #tamil_p2h(Strictly for Tamil post only)
For other post use : #poem2heart #p2h
Use the correct tag for the challenge. For other posts don't use this challenge.
It's for fun so enjoy everyone feel free to participate . To participate in old challenge use #p2h_all (Only for old challenge by Poem2heart)
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Use the correct tag for the challenge. For other posts don't use this challenge tag. Don't tag me using my Mirakee Id and don't mention in your comment section for a read. I will Only read # tag posts other tagging method will be ignored.
Tag only Tamil & English posts.
As you notice I always prefer only poems. Because, in poem we can explain lot in minimum words. And time saving. For me poem is much understandable than page long stories..
63 6 16- authenticcreations When is the third part coming ?@poem2heart
- poem2heart @authenticcreations 3rd part will be posted today between 05:00 PM - 05:30 PM
- poem2heart @_griffindork I give the details in post. Check the post
- authenticcreations @poem2heart okay , I'll be waiting..
- poem2heart @authenticcreations