Rewrite...
Rewind the feelings and remember the flow of time, rewrite the love that shall make us wild..
© नीर
#rewrite
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Rewrite
The beat that starts ,
Did you ever hear it .....!
As a part that change ,
Will the path cross again......!
©priya_writings9 0You write the love.
I'll rewrite the story.
©inkofalaktaka7 0Time has frozen
I'm in a place
Where time froze
I know its not moving
Because you are still
Here with me
You still care for me
You are still in love with me
But I know its my choice
Loving you boy
So I'm not gonna let go
And hope I can rewrite the ending
©kikilove8 0You can not change your past
but you can write your future by
focussing on your present
©unsungdreams8 0I want to........
Takeout all yr pain
Erase all yr past
Rewrite our story
Relive without..forever..
©sarojinipradhan8 2 1wannabecreative 82w
This is a rewrite of the song "Mirrorball" by Taylor Swift...if you know the song, read it in tune...if not, I hope you enjoy it as a poem as well
(If you want to hear the original song, link is in bio)
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I already know, you are a mirrorball
You can show me every version of myself tonight
You're dancing on the floor
Shimmering beautiful
And if you break, I'll collect all your pieces
Hush! When noone is around my dear,
You can be who you want to
Not worrying what they'll think about you, shining just so bright
Hush! Even if the end is near,
You can be who you want to
Not worrying what they'll think about you, shining just so bright
I already know, you are a mirrorball
You can change everything about you to fit in
You are the beauty I've never seen,
Don't have to change anything
Cause I've seen your every edge glisten
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ALL WRITTING RIGHTS IS RESERVED TO TAYLOR SWIFT AND JACK ANTONOFF and probably me
(Note: this is not plagiarism, it's rewriting.....)
I literally love her songs, and her songwriting skills are just amazing
#mirrorball #taylorswift #rewrite #folkloreMirrorball
(Rewrite of "Mirrorball" by Taylor Swift)
©wannabecreative58 64 21- hharshitha @wannabecreative everytime I listen to folklore I wish I had white wine with me. The entire album is filled with breakup aesthetic songs. Damnn... August, seven, betty, hoax are my life rn ❤
- malhar_ Link kaha hai..mujhe link chahiye mujhe link do....
- lovenotes_from_carolyn Gorgeous lyrical rewrite!
- wannabecreative @lovenotes_from_carolyn Thanks It means a lot ♥️
- lovenotes_from_carolyn You're more than welcome.
Story
Let's rewrite our story, the way we wanted it to be.
©restysoranges17 0 1pagal_sadhvyai 94w
जो तुम आ जाते एक बार!
कितना बदल जाता यह मृत संसार
अपलक तकते रहते तुमको यह द्वार
जिनको कभी था तुमने मुँह फेर त्यागा
करते आज वह तुम्हारा आदर से इंतेज़ार
जो तुम आ जाते एक बार.......
कितना विरह नहीं है हृदय ने झेला
अब तो दीवारो का मन भी बोला
दिखने लगे है इन आँसुओं के दाग
तुम्हारे चरणों पर दूँ सब कुछ मैं वार
जो तुम आ जाते एक बार........
आँखों के मोती भी हर्षित हो जाते
देख तुमको तुम पर समर्पित हो पाते
अधर जो जाने कब से हुए थे उदास
मिल उठता उनको भी हसीं ख़्वाब
जो तुम आ जाते एक बार.......
जो छाए हैं आज बन काले बदरा
बरस उठते उमंग में सावन अंगना
जल उठते फिर बुझे हुए चिराग
देती साँसे पग- पग तुम्हारा साथ
जो तुम आ जाते एक बार.......
©pagal_sadhvyai3 0screamymumbles 103w
Get, Set and Work
#stars #zodiac #rewrite #rewritethestars #efforts #potentialOnly our efforts have the potential to
" Rewrite The Stars "
©screamymumbles6 0 1the_creative_mind 104w
Me..
My thoughts are a hurricane
And I always have to kiss the rain,
But when will my time come
When somebody will take away my pain?
I have got fire in my eyes
And I am scared someone may burn,
Trying to figure out what they mean
And break me in every turn.
My life is a race
But slowing down my pace for love,
Would only do more harm than good
To my life above....
My eyes may not be Crystal clear,
But they explain my story, dear.
About the life that I left behind,
So that nobody can ever find.
That once I was broken and lost,
Running from reality,
But how long could I run from the truth
That would always be my sanity?
I have a ranging storm inside,
Which I can no longer hide.
So accept me as I am
Cause I am happy with my so-called life,
Which I would rather like to live alone
Than to just sacrifice.
©the_creative_mind40 21 10- gemmah A very nice piece!.. and those rhymes stay safe and take care..✌
- the_creative_mind @gemmah Thank you dear! And take care of yourself too
- the_creative_mind @writeforjoy Thanks
- the_creative_mind @vivan_the_peaceminded Thank you
Art of Life
I wonder if life is like art?
A blank canvas at the start.
As life proceeds on going;
Art continus flowing.
Every humans piece is unique.
Even when one doesn't believe so; Oneself can be the hardest critique.
The beauty of art is even with mistakes; Solutions can be found to fix and remake.
Results may not be as imagined.
There still lies beauty; Do not abandon.
If one must start over;
There now lies experience, Just go slower.
C. Jackson
©cc199417 0pacifierpunch 112w
Re-write life!
Look beyond the odds,
Smell few intelligent pods.
Listen to your heart,
indulge in lost arts.
Find your emotional locus
and restore your blurred focus.
Recount your insolent ways
and remove their nasty trails.
Stand by the ground you mocked,
and let your balance strike a chord.
Bring together pieces of your warmth
and connect with people dealt with disregard.
When the time has twisted its songs,
re-write your tale and undo the wrongs!
©pacifierpunch3 0 1mahtobpensdown 115w
Chapter
A mere simple and famous story you might have heard or read of coming out tomorrow... It's a rewrite in my own words; not that I remember it exactly as it taught me important lessons more than a decade ago...
©mahtobpensdown
Stay tuned .... Part 1 coming soon
You will like it for sure. Encourage others to read. God bless
Wait till tomorrow40 6 6-
odysseus
Waiting...
All the best...
✍️✍️✍️✍️✍️ -
mahtobpensdown
@nishabd_sharma @priyasandliya @odysseus Thanks for the lovely comments and wishes .. The first part is out now ...
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- mahtobpensdown @i_am_unprofessional_writer Thank you so much for the appreciation and liking spree ❤️❤️ God bless you Stay Safe
A Lie
With so many things going around,
With so much negativity that surrounds,
I try to look above, i try to breathe,
But i can't, as i am already stuck in dark so deep.
Then you came along,and i saw a ray of light,
I walked towards you, hoping you were the morning of my endless night.
I walked with heavy steps, I trembled then i fell too
Jst to start scratching and crawling towards you.
I was longing for someone like you my whole life,
I found peace in you,you became the end of my inner strife.
I fell in love, the moment i saw you,
You gave the only meaning to my life that i thought was true.
With every step that i take, you move a step away,
I am exhausted by your games, i hate the way you sway.
With so much pain, I am not going to thrive,
Without you i am dying ,you are the drug that was keeping me alive.
I kept going through the pain, as I thought the end was nigh,
But I realise now, you were never there, you were just a BEAUTIFUL LIE.
©_overthinker_6 0broslav 125w
Paper Cut
Being
Left behind
Feels like
A slow death
From
A paper cut
The pain and heartache
Still
Stinging when
I wake up
I get drunk
Meet the Day
Fucked up
Because
When the morning
Comes
Losing you
Is still tough
It's like a slow
Death from
A paper cut
My heart
My lips
My body
My brain
Hoping to find
A part of me
That you didn't stain
The songs
The movies
The laughs
Seems that I just
Didn't understand
I was
Falling in love
Inside your
Selfish land
Slicing
My heart
With our
Paper thin
Plans
A slow
Death from
A paper cut
You giving
Us up
With such a
Careless shrug
Like
We were
Some sort
Of bad drug
It was like
A death from
A paper cut
I got drunk
But it wasn't enough
Cause the morning's
Here and
Losing you
Is still rough
But
I'll be alright
Because
It's not a death
It's only
A paper cut
I'll heal
From you
Sealing
My heart
Closed shut
You weren't
A slash
Only
A paper cut
©lunabroslav13 0इश्क़
क्या ज़रूरी है
हर मोहब्बत मुक्कमल हो,
कुछ सफ़र
मंज़िल से भी खूबसूरत होते हैं
©ishu_sinha12 1I see God In You
I Didn’t Ask For Anything
Whatever I gave you,
I gave you from the bottom of my heart.
The heart that beats for you, Jaan.
I Didn’t Say Anything
I Didn’t Weigh The Pros And Cons
Whatever I Gave you,
I gave you the brightest smile I can put up
Masking My Pain
Only so you could be happy
Hoping that you would be
My sun
Who would brighten up my life
My shelter
Who would make me feel like home
In this little time,
You are my own,
You are also a stranger
I don't know how
I see God In You!!
How?
Tell me how?
What do I do now?
I'm lost
I'm losing hope...
©rohannnn10 0jynxielynn85 141w
Demon Lover "Second Edition"
A malevolence lingers, filling a lust-thickened air.
She waits, kneeled upon the hardwood floor.
Her essence and blood drip on to the boards, she chants his sirens call.
Her body shakes, his voice caresses her skin, sharp and sweet, it makes her ache.
His beautiful claws, twist upturned breast. Moans of pain and ecstasy fall from chapped lips, feeding him and his hell-bent needs with her screams.
Used, she lies broken upon the floor.
He gently places a kiss upon her blood-stained lip, and whispers "good pet". ©jynxielynn8510 1 1mr_wordy 142w
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#mirakee #writersnetwork #readwriteunite #pod #ceesreposts #keepttrying #Newlines #Rewrite #Learning @mirakee @writersnetwork @mirakeeworldMy Pair of Single Eyes
I despise the part of me that loves my lonliness,
That revels in the ginger tinged leaves that fall on a dim Autumn day,
That watches those leaves succumb to the breeze, swept away with ease.
I despise the passiveness within that lets me watch the world decay,
The part of me that seeks solace in its rain,
Resides within a secluded cave,
When it emerges from its' depths,
It steals sight, sense and happiness from the day,
Erupting out through quivers and lost weight,
Sending the living half of me to its grave.
S.A
©mr_wordy9 3 1- penny_love You have some very beautiful pieces
- mr_wordy @penny_love Thank you very much. Haha. Honestly my writing fluctuates. Im currently in writing block lol.
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penny_love
ill turn notifications on for your newbies...
thankyou for also reading mine xo