Tell me this,
Tell me that,
But i will choose action over words!
I would love to taste bitter truth rather than sweet poison.
Don't tell me sugar coated lie.
I would love to listen what i lack rather than fake appreciation or nothing at all.
Tell me at my face, i will surely ponder at it,
Don't tell me to have fake colloquy.
I would love to have a connection by heart,
Except trust and dedication, no need to make promises,
As it's action that is louder than words.
Don't tell me big vows rather keep doing your performance.
I would love to have the relation of humanity with all faces,
Don't tell me your religion, caste or any other such ground of introduction,
Tell me you're a human and i will be more delighted.
I would love to be the best i can be for someone,
No matter the base of bond involves need or not,
No matter someone met me with only his/her own purpose.
Don't tell me i am foolish,
For if i know to be gentle, i too know how to cut my strings off with mean people, after i give them few chances !
Tell me my mistakes or the criteria where i need to improve,
Tell me straightforward, instead of others.
I would love to hear that, and analyse your words.
Don't tell ills or judge without listening,
For every coin has two sides,
Stop pretending yourself omniscient.
Don't tell me sugarcoated words,
Don't tell me this or that,
Tell me one time something,
And i will make sure you'll remember me for being nice with you even if you stab.
Since, 'Karma' is always with us,
Why would i ruin it for you or i..!!
#peace
#love for all
©_writer_at_heart_
#synecdoche
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KNOWLEDGE OF BODY
Apart from Kafka
We either hide or deny
Our own metamorphosis
The eyes try to see the beauty of colors
But the bodies remember the pain of
Being caterpillars
©therapisttales63 6 15- kin_jo Wow
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- kosachaya Congratulations on editors choice ❤️
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Can I change these well worn spots,
or am I destined to be this animal?
©elli_mcfarlane6 0 1Synecdoche
The swarm just drank directly from the bunches.
And the bunches were so happy that they could serve them..
@bibliophile35 3 1Off Balance
The biggest bottle drove me off balance
To a world diverse,i cannot quite retrace
But a world of craze a world of daze
Is where,off balance,the bottle drove me
©_yours_truly_Photo By Thais Muniz on Unsplash10 0 1Lifetime.
“I would rather spend one lifetime with you, than face all the ages of this world alone. ...
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Synecdoche
From afar: An epitome of perfection!
But the closer I got, there were glaring omissions!
The radiance warranted all sunshine and rainbows,
But the clouds of gloom were hung just below!
This twin nature had me wondering,
Which one to take in tow?
Which narrative to behold,
Which one is the creator's synecdoche?
©atharva_bhajne11 1 1-
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Dance
The legs were tired
still the hands moved
for the dance of life
teaches you to move on
©mithirocky13 2 3-
yuktibhatiaaa
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sonalbhatiarandhawa 40w
Watch your step
Do not falter
Only a strong mom will
raise a strong daughter.
Teach her to say no
More than to say yes
To never feel at loss
Always be her own boss.
To take the world in her stride
and never compromise her pride.
She is the creator and the nurturer
And no one can dare belittle her!
#synecdoche #wod @miraquill @writersnetworkTwo pairs of feet
Two pairs of feet
One shall follow
One will lead.
As they grow
through high and low
Some years after
The roles they play
is what may differ
the leader then will
become the follower
©sonalbhatiarandhawa10 0 2ak_anjali_daydreamzz 40w
#synecdoche
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7 Aug 2021 10.30 pm
bones - bodies
pink - sad
eyes - people
mundane - earthly
twinkle toes - to dance
tickle the ivory- play piano
string - musical instruments
pearly gates - heaven/ Leave the dead to death /
Souls free from bondages of bones
Sins atoned, pink eyes recite elegies
Traverse the realm of the mundane
Twinkling toes to the tickling ivory
Chords of strings guide to destiny
Clinquant abode of pearly gates
©ak_anjali_daydreamzz86 86 37-
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@ak_anjali_daydreamzz yeah red Tae your fav
Hmmm.. but you words are like pearl shining everywhere ❤ - zeiun_ziolet Beautiful!!!
- lunarwolf Wow
- ak_anjali_daydreamzz @btslove these, I'm editing back
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btslove
@ak_anjali_daydreamzz but
It's perfect
_writer_at_heart_ 40w
// Here, the term 'flesh' refers to the living creatures,
'faces' refers to people,
'a hand' is used to refer to helping someone, for example, to lend a hand and
'helping hands' refers to the person who is willing to help. //
Synecdoche(Greek for " taking together ") is a figure of speech wherein a part of something is used to signify the whole, or(more rarely) the whole is used to signify a part. For instance, "ten hands" signifies ten workers and "a hundred sails" signifies ships.
❤ Today, i have written a poem using synecdoche in less than 10 lines and after that i have also written the message my poem gives. ❤
#synecdoche #wod #writersnetwork #poem #inspirational #ceesreposts #miraquill @miraquill @writersnetwork #helpingHelping hands
Give a hand to the one who seeks,
But understand the difference in helping and making someone dependent or lazy.
Give a hand to the one who ask for it,
But realise if it won't trouble you bad later.
Give a hand to the genuine needy faces,
But analyse if they can't really help themselves.
Give a hand to the flesh and to everything over thy planet,
But remember, at times, you too deserve & need that kindness you show towards others ;
as a part of self care!
---------------×--------------
"Message : Helping hands are the best. When needed, use it for others & yourself too! Apart of being aide for others, be your own aide too. During your tough hours, be kind and helpful to yourself just as you would be for someone else."
©_writer_at_heart_25 7 6- shadowofthoughts_ Your welcome ❤️
- lovenotes_from_carolyn A very worthy message in this marvelous submission!
- lovenotes_from_carolyn You're more than welcome.
Obscure Reality
©ovais43
She pampered the words
packed them in beautiful wrappers
to send to the person; she loves
and upon reaching his doorstep
she saw many millions lying there.
She didn't even think
He might be waiting only for hers.35 7 12- heartsease Amazing ❤️
- kanungoswati Packed with emotions
- sahnah Beautiful..
- lovenotes_from_carolyn Good one!!
- pratibhajadhav Poignant
Kalopsia
I search for kalopsia with every rising sun,
But end up in the twilight of dawn.
I search for it in every endeavors
But end up with rejection and dejection.
Later I found that it is embedded in my mind,
A positive attitude and an optimistic thought,
With a proclivity of hard work and persistent perseverance
Will lead to Hiraeth kalopsia.
©the_impeccablebarsha13 0 3Came forth to live here,
A tribe of jolly kinsmen!
Among the gushy streams rolled merrily,
The tribe of zesty kinsmen!
On meandering ways among the mountains rested,
The tribe of mighty kinsmen!
And for the lust of the earth wasted-
The tribe of pointy kinsmen!
Let me know if you cross the path..
With our lost tribe of kinley kinsmen!
©notebook_32 3 8The Pen
The pen might be lazy as log
Yet agile in thoughts
With brawny words
That can wake the sleeping hands
And make the wobbly legs run
Make the world muse
To a beautiful prophecy.
©premPhoto By Nick Fewings on Unsplash18 3 3-
yuktibhatiaaa
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I really liked your way of writing and would love to have u as the co-author of my upcoming anthology
'The Broken wings'. If interested do connect with me at @yuktibhatiaaa on insta. You will be charged a minimal amount for it. - fromwitchpen Beautiful ❤️
pawani_t 40w
Here, wings refer to well-wishers;
Whispers refer to gossip
#synecdoche
#wod
@miraquillBird of Paradise
When the menace of dolour cascaded down her shoulders,
No wings could protect her from the agony.
She could hear all the whispers around,
Seeking to dispirit her.
Yet she did not give in,
She assembled her heart petals bit by bit,
And today, bloomed into a magnificent bird of paradise.
©pawani_t21 1 5-
yuktibhatiaaa
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Dump in a box of crackers
I wailed,
Left lone & lived on filthy streets
I begged,
I’m the abandoned, how we will bring about a change ?
©snehalv41 3 7-
yuktibhatiaaa
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- fromwitchpen Damn
The waters do
not understand
that when they fall as rain,
it's a blessing to only
those heads that are accomodated under roofs.
©the_inhabitant30 3 8- paperwhites WOWW
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yuktibhatiaaa
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_fallen_angel_ 40w
#wod #synecdoche #pod @miraquill @writersnetwork
Hi All,
Damn, I'm late in posting today. ♀️He calmed the wind
With his arms of peace.
Beneath his love,
The harvest began to reap.
©_fallen_angel_Photo By Siebe Warmoeskerken on Unsplash54 21 12- _fallen_angel_ @calm_chaos I'm doin well too..thanks ...❤❤
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Love story
Jealousy and hate
both are the characters of love story.
♥❤
©hoorbanu98
《 7-8-2021 》