Haiku-Sonnet Poem (5:7:5 Syllable Count)
Pitter-Patter Rains
Bring The First Fragrance Of Mud
Brings Peace To The Soul
Vitalizing The Senses
Invigorating The Mind
Rains Bring Happiness
Touching Hands And Face
Tiny Sprinkles Of Water
Give Glimpse Of Nature
The First Showering
Signifies Prosperity
Sign of God's Blessings
Flowers That Bloom in Full Swing
To The Petals Raindrops Cling...
Meghana Doshi
©doshimeghana7
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doshimeghana7 48w
Haiku Sonnet Poem Challenge by @writersbay
4 Haikus with Syllable Count as 5:7:5 for each Haiku
A Rhyming Couplet of Syllable Count as 7:7
#writersbay #mirakee #writersnetwork #wov422 3 8Down in the valley
Grows wild roses and lilies
Near abandoned homes
Chimneys that don't smoke
Wicker fences without gates
Missing window panes
At night wind whistles
Through the valley of the dead
Where nothing sustains
Except flower beds
Decorating graves of them
Fought for the nation
I hear the souls at night scream
Wonder where have gone their dreams
©puchka17 2 1Storm ⛈️
Gloomy cloak descends
bolts of fury splitting sky
a heavy downpour.
Splatters of rain fall
like needles hitting my skin
I run for cover.
Light starts seeping through
raindrops evaporating
I sigh in relief.
As I close my eyes
earthy scent fills my senses
it's the after rain.
Fear not of the storms that come,
they shall all pass, just keep calm.
©300roses9 1 3the_speccy_outsider 48w
Vitiated by
Indigenous laws under
Archaic aegis
Transcending to an
Iota of a world where
Ubiquity fleed
Where petrichor seemed
Like an artifact stored in
Attic of the heart
And none misused their
Abridged power to showcase
A panalopy
Of orthodox perceptions
For third gender family
There's been a myriad of mendacious rumours that only add up to the fire rather than extenuating it. The third gender community is a part of our society since ages. Considered as a symbol of unity and strength by some. Some only think about them when a certain religious ritual is to be carried out. But spew venom about them once their purpose is fulfilled.
It is a life choice that was concomitant. Yet they strive to struggle to make their mark in the society even after being a subject of harsh treatment by some. The society should contemplate the fact that people of the community aren't provided with a higher education or employment opportunities and are, therefore, forced to ask for money. It is not something they do willingly, rather it's a choice they have to make.
I wish for a parallel world where the Third Gender would be revered and considered as equals. Where they'd marry the person they love. Where the young ones would no longer store their respective dreams into an attic inside their heart, closed for eternity, or put on lipstick, wear a saree and go to people's houses to give blessings. The same people who loathe them and are cunning.
I hope people don't misuse this honour they get when the Hijras, as they are referred to in India, visit their house. I hope they respect them and help them if they are in ardent need of it. To make them a part of the society and not ostracize them.
Not to forget the ancient belief, that their 'dua' (blessing) is always heard.
©the_speccy_outsider
For posts on similar theme, check out #BreakingStereotypesAndTaboos
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Seldom are the musings of pristine past revalatory;
Often transcending one to a land where misfits reside;
Getting congenial with phantasy, away from archaic norms.Photo By Christian Keybets on Unsplash64 64 26- jaya___ Woahhhhh this tag is so brilliant!!! Amazing indeed and so apt at breaking stereotype... cheer to beyond the gender binary thanks for participating as well
- the_speccy_outsider @jaya___ Thank you so much for the read and kind appreciation, Jaya!
- the_speccy_outsider @jaya___ Will upload my post today for the challenge.
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stardust_writes 48w
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Dark gloomy clouds cover
the infinite sky, heart heavy
with misery thoughts
Small misty raindrops
fall from heaven embracing
my storm battered soul
Rain promises hope
of a beautiful rainbow
sans pain and despair
I can smell the dewy
pleasant petrichor in the
air, infusing joy.
Pour all your grief to the rain
your soul's sorrows it shall drain.
©shobana_suresh
@writersbay Thank you for the ❤️ and the Repost.
68 31 24- kin_jo Profound
- puranidiary Wow wow congrats
- pallavi_b Woaaah this is fabulous ❤️❤️
- love_whispererr Spectacular
- shafiya_kul I shall dry
santor_674 48w
Poetries And Rain
It was a nightfall,
When the sky seemed somber ,I
settled on my desk.
Clouds veiled remnants of,
The riven lantern for me
To procure solace.
Caressing my ears,
Swishes away the wind with pace.
The earth scents finer.
A piece of paper
In hand, I lie on and grin
On reading - "Tulips".
//The rain drenched over my curls,
And her words etched in as pearls//
©santor_67427 12 5- santor_674 @a_gentilischi Thank you so much for your appreciation ❤️
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rusha_c 48w
Zephyrlily sways
with rain merrily, like cute
poised ballerinas.
Birds chirp in delight
as the light drizzle quench their
thirst and soothes their souls.
Grey clouds reveal my
gloomy thoughts, as they shed tears
of immense anguish.
Petrichor smells like
hope to my otherwise numb,
frozen to core heart.
Rain beholds thoughts beyond words,
It falls and expresses all.
©rusha_c
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33 18 11- paperwhites Like cute poised Ballerinas
- paperwhites WOWW
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The rain falls on me
but my pain keeps me dry
it weeps and flows away.
Sweet petrichor attracts all
but those rotten dreams breathe on
killing all sweetness.
Cool breeze hugs me tight
but wounds stay untouched as the
chains of regrets binds.
Clouds, thunder, light dance
but outside my window it's
death strolls as life ebbs.
It is very dark and sad
but hope wipes away all bad.
©antarraal33 12 9- lunarwolf You're very welcome btw
- kin_jo Nice one
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consequences 48w
-- Had to combine winter and monsoon :(
-- The couplet has two iambs.
-- Title credits to @writersbay #wov4Of doubts and catastrophes
Spring breaks the silence
n' woes of my chaotic heart
and blooms hopes within.
Summer brings sanguine
smiles on my scarry portrait
and shows bistre dawns.
Fall brings festival
garlands to light up my life
and brew death poesies.
Winter snowflakes n' rain
drizzles touch my cheeks
and bring love scents then.
Among all seasons which drift into voids,
you chose to be the only one who poisons.39 21 16- daffodilpearlzz You're welcome :)
- _solitaire_ Lovelyy :)
- consequences @_solitaire_ Thank you!!
-
squared
This felt like a lyrical poem :D
Amazing ❤️❤️❤️ - consequences @squared Thank you!!! :")
RAIN
Gloomy are the sky
Clouds exploding with huge sound
Pouring crystal drops
Dripping on dry soil
And my soul breathe petrichor
Rising from the ground
Whistle of the wind
Voices whispers through the trees
Leaves began swaying
And the sound that rhyme
Beating, dancing on matter
Sync with my centre
Drops that falls will quench my thirst
Bring me joy and makes life smooth.
©stelly16 3 2loves_passion 48w
Haiku sonnet
The Rustling of leaves
Under melancholic sky
Dream panorama.
Rain celebration
Comes alive with the sounds by
Flora and Fauna.
The first dewdrop flows
From the veins of God through stone
Smells like petrichor.
Harbinger of death
Rains arrive as hope to the
Dreamy multiverse.
Rain comes as a clarity
After days (of) depravity.
~Munshra_khatoon
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@mirakee @writersnetwork @writersbayTHE RAIN ODYSSEY
44 12 14- loves_passion @kosachaya Thank you maam
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artemiswrites 48w
Four Haikus and a Couplet(a Haiku Sonnet), which is an Ode to the Rain.
#wov4 #writersbay @writersnetworkThe rain dances to
the tunes of the Wind Song like
a graceful peacock
Bottles of fragrance
that the rain wears on itself
permeates my heart
Poetry takes a
cue from the jasmine plant and
blooms on my paper
And I take on a
hue as beautiful as a
newly rain washed sky
Rain soothes the wounds of the heart
Pain and the heart; ways they part.
©artemiswrites71 18 27- stardust_writes Wow this is beautiful ✨
- stardust_writes I loved the couplet❤️
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- kairos_ I love rains, I love this! Beautiful it surely is.
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©thelogophilia
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Innumerable
Universe exist within
Poet's vibrant mind
Whose verses transport
Us into deep realms of our
Minds ousting darkness
Where the nether worlds
Illumine manifesting
Inconspicuous dreams
Our soul drenched in dreamy rays
Like petrichor post rain days!
©the_ice_breakerUniverse
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magical_poems 48w
~Haiku Sonnet~
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Metaphors of love
Falling from the sky so grey
And cool breeze astray
Droplets furling itself
Into the ocean of life
A different world
Blanket of silence
Wrapping the ocean where just
Large ripples are seen
Mysteries waiting
Below the dark black surface
With dangers so keen
This universe, quests unknown
Ready to journey alone
©magical_poems
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#wov4 #multiverse #wod #pod #oceans #rain #monsoon #love #life
@mirakee @writersnetwork @writersbayThe world with mysteries unknown
Ready to solve it alone
Mother ocean with secrets hidden
And risks and dangers overridden .......
©magical_poems17 8 4-
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_gk_07 48w
----------- H A I K U S O N N E T ----------
HAIKU -- Petrichor perfume
drowns soul in panaroma,
with zephyr of rain.
Drip-drop orchestra
ease heart's pain, Camellia drops
tranquilize voidness.
Rain caress earth with
lithe, adorns loam with misty
pearls of drip,on silky ground.
Myriad trench entice
the rain, to amass itself
with sound of rhimjhim.
©_gk_07
COUPLET-- Utopia of rain in verse,
a parallel universe.
©_gk_07
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Parallel universe
Sky of poetry
And hemisphere of your love.
My ukiyo.
Elysian clouds spell
Raining verses of pure bliss
Pain, I do not know
Zephyr of pink hymns
Your heart, my blithesome dwelling
Petrichor, my vow
Amaranthine wings
Our volitant souls flutter
Far from caligo.
Your eyes, my calm universe
Where Hope swims with metaphors
©yamini_sinha23 5 7- writersbay Beautifully peaceful.
- thoughtsprocess Beautiful
- inked_selenophile Beautifully described
- heartsease Hope swims with metaphors ~absolutely exquisite and a marvel
- heartsease So serene vibes ❤️❤️
childauthor_345 48w
I can't control changes as they're universal but can make a request to universe to bend the road where my house is breathing alone .
Gliding from the petals of forever , and tangled between the spikes of never ever , I meet someone
Neath rose canopy
Hidden from crystals of pearls
I found her in drops
Gathering all gloom
And storing in storehouse
Of Cardinal clouds
Overturning sun
In orbs of moon everyday
Eclipse drawn her glance
She binds secrets of
Eleven emeralds end , at
Petrichor of charm
Catchy verses inside seas
Are inter - connected heart's breeze .
And
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I collapsed muses
Of melancholy when I
Found her glimpse to weave
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#wov4Dear poetry ,
I lack a spring to soak the summer winds but lenders , they're extinct . A bunch of captivating tales to convey , a flashback to selcouth pages , derived with immortal inks filling none other than the acne , highlighted as stains , first in moon and now in crimson flow of pages .
I could start wonderland of spices with tender tears who don't need any ebullient ecstasy to soothe the shadows of stars . I wish but I can't . I don't have any rainbow who can calculate the wavelengths of each colour and can renovate melancholic atmosphere in serene sky.
I don't know why the sun doesn't visit the moon everyday . Can you give me a constant ?
Can you hold my hands till the ending of fragments , not to replenish facades but to show the fragile ocean so that I keep blowing like hot winds , not to exaggerate bridges with strikes of frozen snow or knocks of pearls .
I stored some desires in womb of time . But 11:11 never came in the manner to cheer and intersect where the dawn and dusk meet as orchard for mistletoe and a scenery with lake of hope , a genesis glacier of fondness that never melts and indeed a home , without any fence .
All gloom hailed over the roof of mine . Gaiety of clouds and catastrophes stored in storehouses of lightenings are fossilized as snowflakes for snow white . I'm still collecting the scars , whose texture will give rise to heritage , not much glamorous yet an Everest of permanence .
I want to be a photographer , to capture smiling streets and sleeping sun under curtains of metaphorical attire . Where possessions are collectively known as " an abode of ours " .
I can survive with some bits of metaphors , a silver brush with delicacy of diamonds and steps made of incredible imageries , but only in imagination . I am afraid that even this innocent pen , carrying the weight of the mountain of desires, may not fade away like dreams, which are afraid of the coming of Nightmares.
Designing a building of I and you , not as we but as universe , So that even in the multiverse we should stay the same .
Another scribbler between line segment of linen and jute . A specie carved between affection and withering particles .
Yours truly ,
Another gazer of multiverse , from verses of stanza .105 50 37- aqstar Yk... This is one of my Fav...!
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And wow! Mr child author,
Your mastery of the English language makes my mouth gape in wonder. I seriously cannot even understand most of those Vocabs you used (not kidding)
And what a heartfelt penning to poetry. You leave me awed. - aqstar @murryben ... ♡...
kri_k_sni 48w
#wov4 #haiku #rain #kri_k_sni
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The dark clouds wallow
With raging winds and water
Dwelling dejection
I look to the sky
I see a fissure of light
Breaking through the clouds
some minutes of rain
the wind blows past my hair
big drops fall on face
The second of warmth
Allows me to take a breath
The scent of soil
Drip drip sprinkles fall
Watch the tears fall from the sky
As the light fades
I can endure now
I’ve seen the light once before
I’ll see it againRain gently falling
The scent in the air is sweet
Refreshing and clean
©kri_k_sni44 24 14- monadeep Beautiful
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